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Hello Friends,

I'd like to share the composition that I finished today. So it is very fresh :)

I am looking forward to receiving your feedbacks. 

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Sometimes your harmonic language is really strange, like when you add diminished fifths to go to a bvii chord but never actually deliver on it or transition in/out of it properly. Combine this with awkward cadences (I think I heard one that cut to Eb for some reason) and it's a little too dense for me to really hear what's going on or your intentions of the piece. It flows nicely through these, though, which is good! It's just kind of weird how it does it.

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On 21.03.2017 at 0:50 AM, Monarcheon said:

Sometimes your harmonic language is really strange, like when you add diminished fifths to go to a bvii chord but never actually deliver on it or transition in/out of it properly. Combine this with awkward cadences (I think I heard one that cut to Eb for some reason) and it's a little too dense for me to really hear what's going on or your intentions of the piece. It flows nicely through these, though, which is good! It's just kind of weird how it does it.

 

Hi @Monarcheon,

Thanks for your comments :)

It was an experimentation for me to use quite different harmonic patterns in sequence. I agree with your comments on cadences.  Maybe next time I should try softer transitions while keeping the variety of the patterns.

 

 

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