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this is the piece I newly composed, hope everyone like it.

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this piece is catchy.  That's a great thing.  My biggest gripe is where is the counterpoint in the first two minutes?  You have these beautiful melodic lines but no support for it.

 

Meas. 15:  If you are going to consider that a counterpoint, mp is not going to cut for the piccolo and flute.  That range is NOT going to project over the orchestra.

 

Just a few thoughts

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