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Symphony No.1 in C minor

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Symphony_No_2_in_C_minor_mp3.mp3

This is the first Movement to my first symphony. worked on this while I was in school this past semester. Please give me feed back on what you think about this piece.

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I agree with maestrowick on the mp3. I'm not really going to comment on sound right now, because what I'm hearing by looking at it might not match up with what you want.
However, I do see a couple things.
1. NOBODY will ever get the rhythm at m. 99 correct and wherever else it shows up (it does a few times). 
2. This doesn't look like a transposed score so make sure your instruments don't say that at the start. 
3. Strings need divisi parts written in vertical brackets (or words is fine). You do it with winds so they just need the same love.
4. Strings with tremolo don't typically need slurs.
But, really, the mp3 would be nice!

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On 6/2/2017 at 11:12 AM, Monarcheon said:

I agree with maestrowick on the mp3. I'm not really going to comment on sound right now, because what I'm hearing by looking at it might not match up with what you want.
However, I do see a couple things.
1. NOBODY will ever get the rhythm at m. 99 correct and wherever else it shows up (it does a few times). 
2. This doesn't look like a transposed score so make sure your instruments don't say that at the start. 
3. Strings need divisi parts written in vertical brackets (or words is fine). You do it with winds so they just need the same love.
4. Strings with tremolo don't typically need slurs.
But, really, the mp3 would be nice!

 

Thanks a lot for your critique, I've uploaded as a mp3 so hope this will help a bit.

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On 5/28/2017 at 5:03 PM, maestrowick said:

Reupload your midi as a mp3

 

I've uploaded as a mp3 so hope this will help a bit.

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