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Critiquing these things is kind of hard, because if they are improvisatory, then we're essentially just reviewing your improvising skills, which I would argue is not the purpose of the forum, if you see what I'm saying. Like I could talk about the use of melody over chordal structure, but... it's not saying anything about the concept of the music.
However, if we're staying in the theoretical, there are numerous parts in each of these that don't sound like the key given to them. For example, C# major sounds like it stays in F# major for the vast majority of the first part. Just little things like that.

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