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I think, overall, the work sounds good. The use of pizzicato is interesting, the thematic material is interesting, and you seem to have a nice contrast in sections. However, ears can be misleading -and a score is something should always be posted when a review (or even opinion) is being asked. My one area of critique would be the overall structure. While the idea of through-composed is strong here, I think the material would be suited to a more thoroughly structured format. The change in the theme is clear throughout -but perhaps restructuring this as a rondo would better assist in memorability. Just a thought. I'd love to see a score to give a more resolute opinion.

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Thanks for your opinion jawoodruff, but I don't have score, because I made this composition with DAW software, which is not score based. 

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Very unique opening with the dotted rhythm. Love how the melody is passed around (not many people do that nowadays unfortunately, and I say "let the instruments have a conversation".  The progression into the triplet rhythm at 0:52 was well executed as well. Yet the transition between the two themes at 1:50 was a little awkward so maybe try a better transition there. What I found most interesting was the ostinato rhythm by the cello at 2:50. After that, it sounded like music that would come out of a well produced tv show (maybe in the sci fi/mystery drama side of it). The return to the first theme around 3:30 was appreciated. Good work

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