Ave María (Nostalgia Guaraní)

I want to share this piece I love, that I didn't wrote. I shared my thoughts about triad layering and impressionism with a friend of mine (who knew just a little bit about harmony) and she did this. I arranged some issues. The idea began with a total deconstruction of Bach / Gounoud's   Ave Maria.

link to the mp3: https://www.dropbox.com/s/48nqfl7dxtkshqs/ave maria guarani.mp3?dl=0

ave maria guarani - Score.pdf

So you just edited the piece? I'm just kind of confused about the context.
It's nice, overall. Some of the stepwise motion (whole and half) was a little bit out of place, and the ending seems a bit rushed, but it's a nice experience that says what it needs to say

The composition is not mine, but I made some arrangements.

What do you mean saying something is out of place?. Other thing is you don't like it. Sorry I ask about that, but there something I read here many times, and I don't understand well what it means.

For me, the music is effective or not, I like it or no, it says something or nothing (to me)... but technical issues are secondary, whenever one knows what he/she is doing. I think eclecticism is for any kind of music nowadays, including tonal. If I were asked to write a  piece strictly following the techniques of clasicism (I hope not) I undertand I'll have to stick to the rules.