Freewayer Posted August 31, 2017 Share Posted August 31, 2017 Hello, Here is about half of first part of my piano concerto but now with orchestra. :D First part (only piano): https://www.youngcomposers.com/t34679/piano-piece/ Looking forward to your comments. :) MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu concert_001 > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted August 31, 2017 Share Posted August 31, 2017 Very dramatic. Can hear a decent amount of Tchaikovsky, Swan Lake especially. Sometimes the orchestration is a bit too heavy handed, I think. Not just because of some interesting cross relations you have occasionally, but just because the line between melody and harmony was a little blurred sometimes. It's great and has great transition work with contrasting sections, but before you go on, I'd take a look over the first part again so everything looks consistent. Good luck! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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