Andrew Ambient Posted September 14, 2017 Share Posted September 14, 2017 Hi to everyone! I'm back with a new piano & strings composition! The title is "the magic white and pink rose". I accept productive comments on my composition. I hope you like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 Use of 5/4 is interesting, I like that. 0:34, D major triad with minor third in the melody sounds awkward, but not actually that bad (can't tell if it's a mistake), but I don't know if that's what you intended, since ambient music normally subscribes to more functional harmony. The inversions once the low tone enters the picture are a little weird. This could probably be fixed by making its presence a little less obvious. Like a second inversion chord on a VI chord is kind of awkward. High piano notes around 1:45 are a little too loud. Last chord suffers from the same thing in my second point. Just checking to make sure it's what you want. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew Ambient Posted September 24, 2017 Author Share Posted September 24, 2017 On 15/9/2017 at 5:18 AM, Monarcheon said: Use of 5/4 is interesting, I like that. 0:34, D major triad with minor third in the melody sounds awkward, but not actually that bad (can't tell if it's a mistake), but I don't know if that's what you intended, since ambient music normally subscribes to more functional harmony. The inversions once the low tone enters the picture are a little weird. This could probably be fixed by making its presence a little less obvious. Like a second inversion chord on a VI chord is kind of awkward. High piano notes around 1:45 are a little too loud. Last chord suffers from the same thing in my second point. Just checking to make sure it's what you want. 5/4 isn't the time signature but 4/4. I've chosen the inversions of some piano chords because I liked the sound. I hope you glad to be listen it whereas if you don't like it I will improve then. Thanks for your constructive comments! :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted September 24, 2017 Share Posted September 24, 2017 I find it beautiful and inspiring. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maarten Bauer Posted September 24, 2017 Share Posted September 24, 2017 Lovely piece and picture. Both melody and accompaniment are very simple, yet powerful. Ben fatto! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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