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flucold - electric guitar trio


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it is my minor trio in adagio tempo.
the theme comes to me while i've been hardly flucolded last winter.
my music's friend was going heaven when i start recording session.
so, it is sudly and fully minor scales occurs.
the melody is helded in tenor mostly.
pls share your thought.

 

 

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The articulations on some of your notes seem a little off (staccatos). The mixing on the melody is also a bit weird.
The chords should probably change a little bit, though when you do modulate or use a borrowed chord it's well done.
The 7-8 retardation in your melody line is also a little off putting too.
I agree with ilv's comment about the musical setting.

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On 22.09.2017 at 8:06 AM, ilv said:

For background purposes, this is awesome. However, as a concert piece, I would want more melodic motion. Also, it would be nice if you added a bass line, perhaps with a bass guitar.

 

thanks for the answer. I do not plan concerts, 'cos i'm one man band )))

I'm glad to hear that this track is suitable for the background, because usually my music is too active for this.

I did not quite understand the comments about the bass line. bass guitar is present throughout the track except for places with a guitar harmonic figure. The bass line is written according to the concept of the general bass.

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On 22.09.2017 at 7:16 PM, Monarcheon said:

The articulations on some of your notes seem a little off (staccatos). The mixing on the melody is also a bit weird.
The chords should probably change a little bit, though when you do modulate or use a borrowed chord it's well done.
The 7-8 retardation in your melody line is also a little off putting too.
I agree with ilv's comment about the musical setting.

 

thanks for your comments, they are always relevant and useful. I hear warmly that the modulation is rather rude and inert.

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