JoeViola Posted September 23, 2017 Share Posted September 23, 2017 I wrote this for a small orchestra and its only about 4-5 mins long but I hope you enjoy. For more of my compositions see www.soundcloud.com/joeviola2 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu StrengthandPower > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aMusicComposer Posted September 23, 2017 Share Posted September 23, 2017 Is there a score to follow? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoeViola Posted September 23, 2017 Author Share Posted September 23, 2017 Here is the score PDF StrengthandPowerPDF Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aure_liano Posted October 3, 2017 Share Posted October 3, 2017 (edited) I do not know, how experienced you are in composing music to larger ensembles like this, but if you don't mind, I have a few suggestions. I like the themes, it is nice how they use penthatonic stuctures. If I were you, next time I would more concentrate to the chords, the harmony, because in the second part the repetitive harmonisation a bit annoying to me. For example in the Section E you use again the theme of D, but it would be much nicer in my opinion, if you change a bit in the harmony (fg. 58. m VI. -> IV.). About the score: 1) It is really great, to see the rehearsal signs, it makes easier to follow the score. 2) It would be much readable, if you write the Bass Cralinet in F-key (in case you do not want to work in transposing score) 3) If you write tremolo for stings, it is confusing to see slurs in the score (fg. 68-74 m.), avoid that. Well, I hope it is helpful, and I would be curious, if you will make any progress in this piece. Edited October 4, 2017 by Aure_liano Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.