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This piece comprises of quick snippets of ideas, which I tried to mend together into a scene. 

0:00 - 1:22  Introduction of Town (surrounded by lush forestry) 

1:22 - 2:10  Introduction of Hero

2:10 - 2:26 Pans overhead - flying deeper into a dark forest... [Transition]

2:26 -  3:05 Army of Enemies approaching 

3:05 - 3:44 Shrouded in darkness, the Main Antagonist speaks to his comrades.

3:44 - 4:24 Reveal of Antagonist, the Hero's brother!

4:24 - Panning overhead farther and farther away, overlooking the entire world 

Tell me what you think. I'm looking to improve as much as possible. 

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During the introduction, I thought it had a very nice melody; amazing percussion in this part. 

Introduction of the hero, great use of the strings and brass style instruments!

Between 2:10 - 2:26 led into the 'approaching army' bit VERY nicely! 

Approaching Enemies, great way to bring up the tension a bit.

I must say, I don't often come across a piece that blends different ideas together well in a good cohesive way, and in this you did a fantastic job. Although I must say the ending was abrupt. 

9/10

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