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I tried to encapsulate loneliness into this (very) little theme. Hope you enjoy it. 

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Nice job. I definitely get that lonely feeling. It's a nice little theme, though it can't stand alone as is due to its length.

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The loneliness is evident.
This is because you use a simple 'lonely' melody in the beginning.
You kept the harmony very simple too, which is very smart.

For me the composition is not finished yet.
Maybe you could extend the piece in a way that you make the loneliness even more clear.
Perhaps you can use a theme that has a very dense harmony, which can make the contrast to your loneliness very big.

Nice piece though!

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Love it man, it screams for more. I would definitely make a fuller thing out of it. Build the emotion up and break it down towards the end. The sound is very nice as well.

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