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I'm currently one minute into writing this.

Feedback would be very much appreciated on what needs to be changed, as well as on how to continue it :)

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Nice piece! This is excellent for a horror movie because of its dark and spooky atmosphere. The only thing that I can criticize is the use of B-flats near the end. They don't fit well with the rest of the notes. In terms of continuing the piece, I would think about it, as there's numerous logical ways to keep going with it. You could introduce an F major chord, for example, and create a new theme. You could keep going with the same figure for a while and introduce new material later.

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Oh wow...that sounded intense! The drive, the layering, it was all very good. The only two things I felt was a bit off was: the high pitched choir and the sound of the percussion. I think if the notes were changed around a bit for the high pitched voices then it would bring that intense feeling out a bit more.

For percussion, they came in perfectly but there were too many *highs* and not enough bass? If that makes sense...

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Amazing! Probably by now, you have a big progress with it and it would be nice to hear it. Now, I would probably go with a breakdown like in this song that occurs from minute 2:14
 

 

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