Muhammadreza Posted October 20, 2017 Share Posted October 20, 2017 Greetings! This is my newest composition, and for the first time, I composed for a full string orchestra. The track and score are attached to the topic. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Girl in the cafe > next PDF Girl_in_The_Cafe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maarten Bauer Posted October 20, 2017 Share Posted October 20, 2017 I actually like it, but I think you really need to study counterpoint. This helped me too with solving illogical melodies and harmonies and voice leading. Maybe you should take a look at Fux' Gradus ad Parnassum. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muhammadreza Posted October 20, 2017 Author Share Posted October 20, 2017 3 hours ago, Maarten Bauer said: I actually like it, but I think you really need to study counterpoint. Yes, I need that and I'll start studying soon. 2 hours ago, ilv said: Also, the bass line is hard to hear. Actually, I just turned down the volume of that line, because It was too loud when I listened to the piece for first time. 2 hours ago, ilv said: The ending was a bit too abrupt and the piece felt incomplete. I know, and lots of my works have the same problem. Do you have any suggestions for that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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