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I'd love to get your feedback. This is like a sweet lullaby, but with contemporary sounds and melody.

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I really like the harmonies!
They are very inventive and they don't sound awkward.
In fact, they sound very logical.

Very simple piece, but it is actually quite hard to compose simple music, which doesn't sound boring.
Your piece isn't boring at all.

Great work!

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The first melody note sounded out of place, kind of. The melody notes were way too accented for me, but if you're trying to convey something special, leave it as is. The ending isn't proper, and the piece needs further development, but that's all.

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Thank you for your comments, ilv. Noted about the accents. The piece was "hot off the press," and I should have practiced it a few more times before I posted. 

Just FYI, don't expect proper endings from me. In my art music, I often don't do them.

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Yes, I actually have considered that. I agree with you, that might sound really good.

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