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Soliloquy for Violin No. 30

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This is my soliloquy for violin No. 30. 

Here is the link to my Soliloquy for Violin No. 29:

https://www.youngcomposers.com/t34240/soliloquy-for-violin-no-29/

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Good job

The first beat of bar 20 sounds slightly awkward. Maybe start it from the G so it is smoother. 

The fourth in bar 31 does not sound great. Maybe make this a C+A double stop.

Apart from these minor points, it's  a great piece. Well done!

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4 hours ago, aMusicComposer said:

Good job

The first beat of bar 20 sounds slightly awkward. Maybe start it from the G so it is smoother. 

The fourth in bar 31 does not sound great. Maybe make this a C+A double stop.

Apart from these minor points, it's  a great piece. Well done!

 

Thanks for your review, your appreciation of the piece, and your suggestions!

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Other than what @Music Composer said about the double stop, it's a nice little piece. Loved the interesting use of blues notes.

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