Muhammadreza Posted November 17, 2017 Share Posted November 17, 2017 I was just practicing music theory, and then, I decided to write something classic, and I tried to follow every rule I learned. Also, I could solve the problem "feeling incomplete" by using Cadence. I hope you enjoy! MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu nocturne in e minor > next PDF Nocturne_in_E_minor Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabbival507 Posted November 17, 2017 Share Posted November 17, 2017 It's a nice nocturne, you can feel it comes to describe a night. Although, to me, it feels a bit empty. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted November 19, 2017 Share Posted November 19, 2017 It does feel a bit empty. This wouldn't be a problem if there was a contrasting section, but there isn't one. The lack of motion is disconcerting and your chord inversions sonically make the piece confusing harmonically, even if they weren't intentionally static. Score wise, you should probably think about what rests you're using, when, and how long. There seems to be no real pattern for it as it stands, and the slur from an eighth + rest is really weird. A lot you can do with this one! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muhammadreza Posted November 19, 2017 Author Share Posted November 19, 2017 4 hours ago, Monarcheon said: your chord inversions sonically make the piece confusing harmonically Oh , does it mean my melodies are "meaningless" or something like that? I really like to learn more, to improve my harmonies. 4 hours ago, Monarcheon said: Score wise, you should probably think about what rests you're using, when, and how long. Is there any resource for studying? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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