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Hello im novice composer from Argentina and i share with you one of my works. i accept critisisms, they help me improve and i hope you like it.

 



 
 

 

 

 

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The melody in your first piece sounds out of place to me in some areas. Your other two pieces are strong for a novice, lacking a little variety but as they are intended as soundtracks you can get away with that. Great use of Vocals/choir, over-all there's some good work here! I wish I could pull of some of what you've done when I was starting out. 

Keep at it, there's clearly a great composer within you!

 

On a side note may I suggest you upload pieces separately in the future to make it easier for other members to provide feedback.

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For a novice, these are not bad at all. They all have a grand plan in mind. Twin Shadows begins in a very interesting way and the percussion was done well I think. They could develop the melodies more though. 

You definitely have a great sense of what makes a score sound epic but it seems the only thing you lack really various ways to introduce and develop melodies. You developed a great theme in the third one but it needed to be built on and needed some variation. Using the same chords over and over makes a piece boring. Change up your chord progressions and use both major and minor respectively in that sense, switch keys etc. In time though I can tell you're going to be an amazing composer.

Also, your music has great sound quality.

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On 1/1/2018 at 6:12 PM, ilv said:

For your purposes, you've got some great stuff. Great job!

 

Thank you very much! :)

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On 1/1/2018 at 8:30 PM, LostSamurai said:

For a novice, these are not bad at all. They all have a grand plan in mind. Twin Shadows begins in a very interesting way and the percussion was done well I think. They could develop the melodies more though. 

You definitely have a great sense of what makes a score sound epic but it seems the only thing you lack really various ways to introduce and develop melodies. You developed a great theme in the third one but it needed to be built on and needed some variation. Using the same chords over and over makes a piece boring. Change up your chord progressions and use both major and minor respectively in that sense, switch keys etc. In time though I can tell you're going to be an amazing composer.

Also, your music has great sound quality.

 

Thank you samurai for your words and i will take everything into account. :) it is dificult mixing for me now.. :(

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I love it, you've got a very interesting way to insert unique things like the shadow twin voice (great detail to pan it, really reminded me of a conversation between the shadows).

What Percussion library did you use? As a beginner too, I work with the Kontakt Factory Library and some free stuff I found online but I didn't find cheap Percussion library yet ^^

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On 4/1/2018 at 2:52 PM, Leander20null1 said:

I love it, you've got a very interesting way to insert unique things like the shadow twin voice (great detail to pan it, really reminded me of a conversation between the shadows).

What Percussion library did you use? As a beginner too, I work with the Kontakt Factory Library and some free stuff I found online but I didn't find cheap Percussion library yet ^^

 

Thanks very much for your words! i use  Epic Dhol.  Epic taiko ensamble and Action strikes. :)

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