Donethur Posted November 25, 2017 Share Posted November 25, 2017 Hi all, I wanted to share my latest work with you. It is in progress, but I want to rest a bit after continuing it, also I need to think about how to extend it and connect it with other parts I have alkready composed, based on the same melodic motiv. Feedback is always welcome. Thanks! Rgds, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willibald Posted November 25, 2017 Share Posted November 25, 2017 Is this related to the cheerful piece you posted some weeks ago? It sounds like the minor cousin and would fit very good to it. Overall very nice! However, the transition around 0:45 (and its repeat around 0:55) was a bit awkward. People with better ears can point to what is going on harmonically, I can just describe that something is off at these two points. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donethur Posted November 25, 2017 Author Share Posted November 25, 2017 (edited) Hi Willibald, Thanks for commenting. The notes are the ones from the Neapolitan 6th but inverted, maybe that's the issue. I am going to work over the theme a bit (it is work in progress), I will check. And yes, you are right, Piece A, B and C will be connected. :) rgds Edited November 26, 2017 by Donethur Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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