selcukozer001 Posted December 31, 2017 Share Posted December 31, 2017 Hello, Yesterday I finished a new composition. Since I'd listened to it so many times, I couldn't decide whether it sounds OK. I'd like to hear your comments and feedbacks. Thanks for taking your time in advance. Best regards, Selcuk Larissa.mp3 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wg0We749BVM&feature=youtu.be MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Larissa > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted January 1, 2018 Share Posted January 1, 2018 Some weird chord choices throughout. I can't tell if this was totally intentional, especially with the multitude of dominant and tonic/dominant chord cross relationships. A lot of extensions and 7ths in the piece muddied some of the harmonic motion a little bit, though I can see the value of having something not sound so simple because of them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selcukozer001 Posted January 7, 2018 Author Share Posted January 7, 2018 On 01.01.2018 at 7:19 AM, Monarcheon said: Some weird chord choices throughout. I can't tell if this was totally intentional, especially with the multitude of dominant and tonic/dominant chord cross relationships. A lot of extensions and 7ths in the piece muddied some of the harmonic motion a little bit, though I can see the value of having something not sound so simple because of them. Hi @Monarcheon Thanks for your detailed feedback. Your comments help me a lot. Best regards Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selcukozer001 Posted January 21, 2018 Author Share Posted January 21, 2018 1 hour ago, ilv said: I think the dissonances are quite intentional. It's a lovely piece. Hi @ilv, Thanks for your comment. Chord choices might lead to some dissonances. Whether good or bad but all of them was intentional. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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