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This is the third and final movement of my Suite for Violin Duet.

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I think it sounds good.

Was a bit too repetitive for me but I guess it's a matter of opinion.

Why did you choose to use two violins instead of... say... two cellos?

Cellos have both bass and treble notes in them,

I think a cello could give here a bit of... fullness.

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There's nothing wrong with music for 2 violins. Nice ideas. To take away the repetitiveness, you can make variations of the theme section. I felt like the first little bit didn't fit with the rest of the piece.
0:21: A instead of Bb would make more sense
0:34: when you transition back into D major, a dominant chord (A major) would make a smoother transition
0:57: I felt like the C didn't belong here. I think you were looking for a V-i progression in A minor.
1:5: G-sharp instead of G-natural is more logical
I felt like there were notes missing in the coda.

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