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I’m 13 check out my waltz

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I’m thirteen and an aspie check out my waltz couldn’t upload sound via my medium so I had to upload just sheet music.

 

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It'a a pity there is no sound. Anyway one can "hear" in the score. I would say that both the melody and the left hand never change, and their rhythms are equal.  I would try to expand the melody a bit.

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There are lots of parallel movement and little rhythmic change and incomplete chords.  Also some measures seem unplayable (Like measures 25 and 26) but these are common initial tendencies as a novice composer (I went through this myself) so definitely keep composing!

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It is very repetitive, with lots of thr same rhythms. It almost sounds like an accompaniment to something. Maybe writing a melody of over the top of it would help. 

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