Jacob Jones Posted February 24, 2018 Share Posted February 24, 2018 (edited) This here particular piece is one that has been in development for around 7 months now. Initially the goal was to have it sound solemn, however this expanded to a quick uplift from what it once was. The backstory was slightly odd to say the least, and at the times I was writing, I didn't even realize I was changing the mood of the song. So, now I'm looking for feedback, name suggestions, etc. What can I do to improve this song, what do you all think as of yet, seeing that its not even half complete and what would be an appropriate title for it? I'm bad with titles. Edited February 25, 2018 by Jacob Jones Hit enter early, adding new files, removed backstory MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu bandicam 2018-02-24 16-23-32-805.avi > next 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabbival507 Posted February 25, 2018 Share Posted February 25, 2018 Sounds like children flying kites together. It's very cheerful. I think I would have named it... "flight of the kite" or something. I can't really give you a good feedback without notes, if you have them please upload them and call me by writing @Rabbival507 or sending me a private message. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willibald Posted March 1, 2018 Share Posted March 1, 2018 Nice flow. Yes, it radiates merriment, a good, content, comfy life. It could also remind one of an old carousel. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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