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This is a "light" music symphony. It's inspired by the European danceable music. The Scherzo (Danza, Mov. 3) it's made in a folcklore music genre from Puerto Rico (which is where I live)
Any opinion and critics are welcomed.
I. Andante - Tempo di Valse

II. Adagio

III. Danza

IV. Con brio

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A very expansive work, covering a lot of ground. It surely consumed a lot of time to compose it. Time well spent as the symphony is really pleasant to listen to.

Sometimes, you are in danger of losing sight of what you originally wanted to express in a movement (or to put it differently: You really have a wealth of ideas, sometimes I just get the feeling you could structure them more effectively.) Also, the danger of producing a sound carpet is imminent, especially as you deploy a rather larger orchestra for your music. Often, thinning the texture could increase variety and give you options for exploring different soundscapes without needing new material for it.

I write in general terms as I can just give you a few impressions. Unfortunately, I do not have the time to analyse your score in detail. Nonetheless, I hope this helps a bit.

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On 10/4/2018 at 4:03 AM, Willibald said:

A very expansive work, covering a lot of ground. It surely consumed a lot of time to compose it. Time well spent as the symphony is really pleasant to listen to.

Sometimes, you are in danger of losing sight of what you originally wanted to express in a movement (or to put it differently: You really have a wealth of ideas, sometimes I just get the feeling you could structure them more effectively.) Also, the danger of producing a sound carpet is imminent, especially as you deploy a rather larger orchestra for your music. Often, thinning the texture could increase variety and give you options for exploring different soundscapes without needing new material for it.

I write in general terms as I can just give you a few impressions. Unfortunately, I do not have the time to analyse your score in detail. Nonetheless, I hope this helps a bit.

 

Thanks!!

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