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Hello everyone, I am back, this is an original Chinese folk music composed by me, hope you like it, and welcome everyone's commentation.

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Thoroughly enjoyed it!

In the audio the flute was a little loud compared to the other sounds. Your rhythms work very nicely together - they are very complex, but it still sounds clear and organized.

Nice work stating and developing your thematic materials.

Keep it up!

Gustav Johnson

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Your soundfont makes every note of the shakuhachi-type instrument to be embellished it's a little strange, and I know the performer is supposed to know how to interpret a melody like that, but it can't hurt to write it out, especially in western notation.
27 isn't very idiomatic to rhythmic dissonance treatment of the style. I would also say that the koto-type instrument's runs near the end are, even if they are idiomatically next to each other, is a little weird to go both directions. 
It's a nice piece! Good job.

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I like it a lot. It's very nice to listen to. I think there could be a bit more development of the themes, and maybe some more complex harmony. I like the effects that the different instruments have, but some seem to be slightly underused.

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