Battlegun Posted April 18, 2018 Share Posted April 18, 2018 With the final song of our album, "Prisoner 8", this last song, "Wayfarer", concludes on a high and happier note. The bells signify the end of Prisoner 8's journey, as he has finally made it to freedom. Or has he...? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nmP0vyXkmN8 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted April 18, 2018 Share Posted April 18, 2018 I'm a little confused by your V/vi chord resolving to I sometimes. Your bass notes also don't always seem to line up with your upper voices. I know voice leading is important, but it doesn't always work easily. 0:37 is an example of this that comes to mind. Your more laid back section is quite nice. The third section has a really strange chord at 2:07. Not so much the chord it leads to, since I can calculate the extensions to it. The C# in the background is a little weird. Overall, careful with your use of the major seventh voicing, since in parallel it voice leads to parallel dissonances. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sepharite Posted April 21, 2018 Share Posted April 21, 2018 I like it! It really builds momentum, and has a beautiful legato section. Great work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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