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I wanted to create something inspirational. I showed my wife she said it was missing something to give it that oomph. She's not sure what it is, but what do you guys think so far? 

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Added a small bass line. More like this? 

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On 4/23/2018 at 6:12 AM, Sepharite said:

What are some good way to increase tension? Increasing disonance? 

 

Well resolving sustained chords with 7th chords is usually a nice way to maintain 'some' tension. 

So yes dissonance. 

But that doesn't feel like what's wrong, I think it's lacking the feeling of a third. I feels like there is some emptiness in the structure.

I have a dream (Yes) [applause] that one day even the state of Mississippi, a state sweltering with the heat of injustice (Yeah), sweltering with the heat of oppression (Mhm), will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice.

I think if you could mimic what the crowd was feeling rather than what MLK is saying it'd gain that tension, that emotion. that oomph. 

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