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It's very expressive, and your harmonies are great. At times it seems to lose its momentum, and you might want more of a contrasting section. Overall though, it's a great piece! Keep it up!

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Interesting how you leave the waltz texture completely behind you in the middle section and create a more "contrapuntal" feeling (m. 53-120). You could spice up the piece by introducing dynamics; some melodic arcs really demand a more soft treatment. This could also provide the constrast @aMusicComposer mentioned without changing too much.

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16 hours ago, aMusicComposer said:

It's very expressive, and your harmonies are great. At times it seems to lose its momentum, and you might want more of a contrasting section. Overall though, it's a great piece! Keep it up!

 

@aMusicComposer Can you tell me the specific spots? Thanks for the help!

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3 hours ago, aMusicComposer said:

@Youngc

It is mostly just before you reach a transition from one section to another.

 

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