Osbuurn Posted May 1, 2018 Share Posted May 1, 2018 Hey, everyone ! It's been a few years since I've last posted on this forum.. I haven't been as productive with composing as I should've been these past few years.. needless to say, I'm still pretty new. 😛 Here's a piece I finished back in 2014 and posted here a long time ago.. So, since I'm getting back into composing (and that this is arguably my best work out of the very few I have) I wanted some fresh feedback on it.. I wanna improve as a composer.. so please, don't hold back with the critiques. 🙂 Cheers! Nic https://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/8196350de48ded3feb3b24a05e70cc59e7124e39 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted May 1, 2018 Share Posted May 1, 2018 It is nice to listen to it, it has beautiful melodies. I wonderful why you wrote all the left hand in eighths... with the pedal they could have been written in fourths . I would think of adding some middle section changing the texture or the rhythm. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muhammadreza Posted May 2, 2018 Share Posted May 2, 2018 I listened to the piece and it's awesome. I'm a huge fan waltz and nocturne (specially in Chopin's style) and your piece was one of the closest ones to chopin's pieces! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Osbuurn Posted May 6, 2018 Author Share Posted May 6, 2018 Thank you, guys .. I appreciate the feedback 🙂 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeggia Posted June 4, 2018 Share Posted June 4, 2018 I'm also a huge fan of waltz, and this is quite relaxing 😊 Good job! 👍 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eddy67716 Posted June 6, 2018 Share Posted June 6, 2018 I liked it all but the ending. The root E tonic triad in bar 60 show be just a fifth. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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