Jonny Clifford Posted May 1, 2018 Share Posted May 1, 2018 Another piece with not much in mind but trying to be free and expressive for background music. I also have new software by Spitfire which i'm obsessed with. Feedback and criticism welcome. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Koorb > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted May 2, 2018 Share Posted May 2, 2018 It was cool to hear how you transformed the D to so many tonal/diatonic areas including the parallel related keys; my favorite was the E7. However, it's kind of a limiting way to write the piece, and as background music the ebbs and flows are nice but lack the kind of movement that makes the scene pop. The middle section of more intensity was a nice departure but it returned to the old style without changing much, when that would be the perfect time to do it. Nice work. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ampnoe's Posted May 4, 2018 Share Posted May 4, 2018 Hi, i agree with @Monarcheon . It is exactly what you say "free and expressive for background music". 🙂 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Clifford Posted May 4, 2018 Author Share Posted May 4, 2018 Than you. I think I got sucked in by the chord progression and wanted to develop it more and more. Would you say put some of the ending after the 1st part, followed by the middle and then come up with something after that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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