Osbuurn Posted May 19, 2018 Share Posted May 19, 2018 https://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/c9c3baef4efe7fad3a045e31af361ca0d1bc3a2e Another older piece I'm looking to revise.. any advice? 🙂 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seni-G Posted May 20, 2018 Share Posted May 20, 2018 I think the melody has real potential if you expand it. Right now it's like you have half a verse, so keep adding material until you find something you like. I also recommend changing the Alberti Bass. It's like your left hand is playing like Mozart but your right hand is like New Age (or like the water music from Mario 64). Stick with the right hand because what you have is already quite expressive. Can you be freer in your accompaniment and give the left hand something expressive as well? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Youngc Posted May 20, 2018 Share Posted May 20, 2018 I would Expand more. Make a variation of the theme Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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