Monarcheon Posted May 31, 2018 Share Posted May 31, 2018 For any theory or choral nerds out there, I would really appreciate anyone looking over this piece looking for parallel 5th's, 8va's, etc. or incorrect dissonance treatment. I've wracked my brains enough on it, and I know I'm missing something. Thanks for any help or comments! MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu FINAL PROJECT ACT > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tmarko Posted June 1, 2018 Share Posted June 1, 2018 Nice work , Blaire. Here are the possible problems I saw. m8- harmonically sop and bass c to e. Not sure if the passing tones negate the parallel movement. this may or may not be. m28- alto and bass m29 into 30- alto bass m31 into 32- again alto bass. This may be another passing tone situation. My only other observation is regarding our time signature. You've notated cut time, could it be 4/2 instead? Again, very nice work. Hope this helps. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted June 1, 2018 Author Share Posted June 1, 2018 @tmarko Thank you so much! The 4/2 markd 2/2 is just for some reason common in Renaissance style. Even Brahms uses it in his Requiem (3rd movement). I think it's because the longa is being split in two, as opposed to the breve. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted June 1, 2018 Share Posted June 1, 2018 Is it right C# in alto and C natural in tenor (measure 6) ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted June 1, 2018 Author Share Posted June 1, 2018 1 hour ago, Luis Hernández said: Is it right C# in alto and C natural in tenor (measure 6) ? Yeah, it's a spicy little cross relation. 🙂 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted June 2, 2018 Share Posted June 2, 2018 OK it sounds fine. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted June 8, 2018 Author Share Posted June 8, 2018 This is the version that ended up being submitted. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Weepe O mine eyes > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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