edfgi234 Posted June 26, 2018 Share Posted June 26, 2018 Sorry if I am uploading too many pieces at a time. Let me know if I should stop. I was thinking of a misty view when writing this. Hopefully that suits the piece. The main theme doesn't really change that much so that may be a problem that needs sorted, but I'm not sure. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Nocturne in G# minor > next PDF Nocturne in G# minor - Full Score Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted June 26, 2018 Share Posted June 26, 2018 I think it's very good. I like it. The constant rhythm breaks very little time along the piece. Yes, sometimes it changes but, in depth, the rhythm is the same. I always thing some different part enhances the whole piece. That's waht you do in the arpeggio part, but that's the less convincing part (for me), althou, I insist, it's beautiful too. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edfgi234 Posted June 26, 2018 Author Share Posted June 26, 2018 Your feedback on the pieces I have uploaded is always good to receive @Luis Hernández. Thanks for taking the time to comment. It is awesome that you like this piece. Yes I think that breaking the constant rhythm in a piece is something I need to sort out in all of my pieces. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted June 26, 2018 Share Posted June 26, 2018 @edfgi234 This piece has a lot of beautiful ideas. What happens, in my opinion, is that the rhythm is very strong and "marcato" and that's why some "quiet" part would make the return stronger. If a piece is very short it is less important (as happens in teh preludes and works like that). 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edfgi234 Posted June 26, 2018 Author Share Posted June 26, 2018 I see what you mean. I agree with you, I'll try to correct that in this piece. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Youngc Posted June 29, 2018 Share Posted June 29, 2018 during that break in the right hand I could see maybe an octave in the left hand 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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