Jump to content

Recommended Posts

Again very nice.  I'd like to hear the electric guitar; it's too soft..  As in your other piece, I'd suggest, breaking up the electric piano to more variety, than just 1/4 note chords.  LOVED the ending with tempo slow-down..  You might consider, cutting some sections of different instruments, so the sections are more defined, by instrument change.  

I use 'tracks view mode' and score page in Logic to see, where I have instruments coming in, and exiting. Sometimes, I will even color the different riffs in a track.. The visual data, can be helpful, in helping you vary up arrangement more.  

Don't get the point of the Startrek intro..  but that's just my opinion.. Lately I have been thinking  about the 'psychology' of parts, individual motifs/riffs, and instruments chosen.  For instance in The Beatles 'Norwegian Wood'.. the sitar just totally 'tops' off this song.  

I think your instrumentation choices are very good.  Hope this is helpful

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now

×