christiangross Posted July 26, 2018 Share Posted July 26, 2018 This is a short piece I wrote. I always thought it sounded like it could be something out of a Tim Burton Movie. Hope y'all enjoy! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabbival507 Posted July 26, 2018 Share Posted July 26, 2018 Seeing the notes would help. But it's ok that way too. The synth choir/pad feels a little too loud to me. I think that you should keep the piano louder than the others and keep developing it further and further. I think that you actually developed it but I couldn't hear it very well because of the synths/other instruments. I think that you should use the synths as a background for the piano but you really don't have to. My other point- I felt it especially at the end, your instruments are sometimes jumpy. I think that it should be a legato, just like the water you sail on. But maybe you tried to convey something else with the jumpy melodies? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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