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A brilliant piano waltz

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Thank you for the reply.

In the attachment there is the sheet music of the piece.

 

 

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I don't have much time,

here are two things I noticed:

1. Your dynamics should have a sharper change. It never moves above F or below MP.

If you want a static piece (it should be a static dance I think?) then fine, but keep that in mind.

2. A waltz, as far as I know, should be in 3/4.

Look what you did:

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For many years I didn't know the difference between 6/8 and 3/4.

After all, in maths, 6/8 and 3/4... are the same thing!

But here it's different.

Look at the way the bar is separated.

6/8 separates it to two threes,

while 3/4 separates it to three twos.

It also sounds like 3/4.

So- change the time signature to 3/4 and the way the eights are separated into three groups of two instead two groups of three.

Good luck.

 

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Thank you very much for your gentle advices. I'll correct the time signature in 3/4 and I'll try to obtain the right grouping of notes.

Excuse me for the waste of time.

Cheers.

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1 hour ago, eternum1968 said:

Excuse me for the waste of time.

It's fine, helping someone isn't a waste of time.

It's just that my last day of freedom for the next free year is about to be over soon and I can't really focus enough to give you the full advice you deserve.

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