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E.Frantz

Original composition Op.12 No.1.4 (strings)

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Revised the score key signature
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May I ask why you have the enharmonic spellings of certain notes in the beginning (and throughout). The F major chord, especially, is a little weird to have Bbb in it. Even weirder is the D∆7/6 chord 9. It's not diatonic to your key, so no need to feel like it is. The chords themselves are quite nice. In fact, I would just write this piece without a key signature, since you seem to deviate from it so much.
The half note sections in the latter half of the piece take away from the momentum you build with these bigger chords, I feel. mm. 36-39 were my favorite because of parallel structure that could have hinted at a more growing motion, but unfortunately it never really came.
Nice chord choices, overall.

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Yes probably would have been better off with no key signature! I selected all notes and just let Finale spell it out according to the key signature. I really appreciate the critique! Thanks!

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Πολύ ωραίο! Η αναπαραγωγή από ποιο μουσικό πρόγραμμα έχει γίνει; ή μήπως έχει γίνει από κάποια ορχήστρα;

Very nice! Playing from which music program has it been made? or has it been made by an orchestra?

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Posted (edited)

Wonderful piece! Optimal use of rests and harmonies are impressive. Nice work.

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