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I've always enjoyed expressive two-part writing, so I loved that change in texture. A great effect, alternating between the two-part writing and the more choral-style writing. I like this piece very much.

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I like the piece, but it confuses me. It sounds like a struggle between baroque and romantic style, a little bit of freeform harmony. It’s mostly fine, but the parts where the melody is a repeated note at the typical “straight volume” just don’t seem to work. I’d recommend either altering the melody to where it has an arc, or (and this would probably be better) adding some dim, cresc, back and forth through that section, and returning to flat volume at the more baroque parts. Just my two cents.

Thanks for sharing ☺️

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