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Wrote this in a day about a year ago. It's nothing special but thought it was decent for my first composition.

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A little bit hard to follow rhythmically. Adding something else in chords or counterpoint to take away from the power chord or parallel sound might have been welcome, especially in the beginning. When thirds are used, it's a little sparse sounding due to lack of proper upper support.

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