SergeOfArniVillage Posted January 14, 2019 Share Posted January 14, 2019 A waltz I wrote recently, based upon an idea I've had a very long idea. Comments, thoughts, criticisms all appreciated. https://app.box.com/s/unxi7fy67skb4p6cxu6jcxk7ff5dbvsk (Music file) https://app.box.com/s/sxyj3ygiv1ofz38enylk8gq33nrh8emg (PDF file) 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted January 25, 2019 Share Posted January 25, 2019 This is a lovely little work. It's much appreciated the return to A section material isn't so overly elaborated on. I know it's kind of a Chopin thing to do, but I'm not really a huge fan of leaving melody notes to hang and dry, especially when the inner voice stuff remains pretty constant. The fact that they're done in octaves makes me want to believe there's something more important happening there than just establishing material. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted January 27, 2019 Share Posted January 27, 2019 Very nice. The B section is very beautiful. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SergeOfArniVillage Posted January 29, 2019 Author Share Posted January 29, 2019 Thank you both for your comments! Much appreciated 🙂 @Monarcheon Interesting point about the inner voices, I didn’t think of that. I’m constantly striving to find a balance of “is this too little, or too much?” and as I practice, I hope to have the music become more and more “natural.” Again, thank you both! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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