Rabbit Posted February 23, 2019 Share Posted February 23, 2019 (edited) can we delete topics? Edited June 17, 2019 by Sabriel Guindon updated pdf Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pateceramics Posted February 23, 2019 Share Posted February 23, 2019 Nice work! You might want to substitute an expressive marking for the staccato dots on every note, or you can mark the first few bars, and then add "sim." to indicate that the staccato continues through the piece unless otherwise indicated later. For the 2nd violins at the end, you could remove the staccato marking, add a slur over those notes, and let them just flutter their finger back and forth like a trill for the same effect, but something more playable. Fingers move back and forth faster than bows. You might find this helpful, to answer future questions about conventions of string writing: https://wiki.youngcomposers.com/Orchestration:_Techniques_of_Strings_-_Part_I Thanks for sharing, and welcome! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jared Steven Destro Posted February 24, 2019 Share Posted February 24, 2019 Love it, and the ending was quite fitting. The pieces has nice fluidity and the textures seem to really work. Good job! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marc Deflin Posted March 3, 2019 Share Posted March 3, 2019 Very short indeed ! I appreciated it but would have liked to hear more! "Je reste sur ma fin" 🙂 Bravo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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