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Juan, these are so fun! Thank you for sharing with us! Just a couple notes:

In Écossaise 1, you have some notes in the right hand with an accent and a marcato. I would clean that up—just use the marcato.

In Écossaise 4, you have some quickly repeated notes in 1/32nds... are those playable that fast? It seems a shame that the piece's playability could be ruined by just 3 passages.

In the postlude you have the tempo marked as Larguetto (which is arguably the Spanish rendition), but the Italian spelling is Larghetto.

I loved how they were all different moods! Great job, friend!

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10 minutes ago, Tónskáld said:

Juan, these are so fun! Thank you for sharing with us! Just a couple notes:

In Écossaise 1, you have some notes in the right hand with an accent and a marcato. I would clean that up—just use the marcato.

In Écossaise 4, you have some quickly repeated notes in 1/32nds... are those playable that fast? It seems a shame that the piece's playability could be ruined by just 3 passages.

In the postlude you have the tempo marked as Larguetto (which is arguably the Spanish rendition), but the Italian spelling is Larghetto.

I loved how they were all different moods! Great job, friend!

 

Yeah thanks, The 1 I prefer it as it's. The 4th is actually playable at that speed. The problem is that I forgot to notate it as adagio there.

Yeah it's Larghetto, my bad forgot the h

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On 8/3/2019 at 10:33 PM, Maarten Bauer said:

Nice joyful pieces!

I think that you can work on patterns in the left hand.
Maybe some more interaction between the two hands.

 

Thanks a lot!! I actually made a lot of changes, because it didn't fit "Écossaise" for every one, so I just let it as 10 musical moments and changed some mistakes. I will try that on my later pieces, thanks for the advice

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