Falling Cliff Posted October 6, 2019 Share Posted October 6, 2019 (edited) The first (attempted) Symphony, written by the young composer, Drake King. Edited October 6, 2019 by Falling Cliff MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Kings Symphony I > next PDF Kings Symphony I Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jean Szulc Posted October 6, 2019 Share Posted October 6, 2019 Hey! It's quite hard to give opinions on a piece without the sheet music. Could you post the sheets so that we could better analise it? One way or another, some parts sound very pleasant! Best wishes, Jean. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quinn Posted October 6, 2019 Share Posted October 6, 2019 (edited) Agreed. Some parts are good but generally the bass is too thick, let alone unbalanced with what's happening above. In the first movement just too thick. [Edit: try to lay out chords so the spacing between lower notes is wider, upper notes closer.] Performed live it will sound pretty muddy and dark. Likewise, try to introduce some dynamics into it. All the best with it. Edited October 6, 2019 by Quinn shown Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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