Kurt Francois Posted October 9, 2019 Share Posted October 9, 2019 Hello, this is my very first composition. I named it 'Relique', planning to release more in the following weeks.... I love composing melancholic piano songs and am starting in Photography. So I tried to combine both together... Any inputs welcome... 😉 Watch it here : Milky Way & Emotional Piano Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted October 12, 2019 Share Posted October 12, 2019 Transitions are a little harsh. Particularly the one going back to the A section at 1:51. Ending on what's basically a subdominant chord in a harsh inversion attempting to function as a VII in your original tonic of G minor was pretty jarring, especially since there was no transitional inner voice work. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jean Szulc Posted October 13, 2019 Share Posted October 13, 2019 Hey! I think I should point out a few things. If you decide to add a violin to the piece, it's important you note it down somewhere. If you want to have only this recording of the piece, it won't be a problem, but you expect it to ever be performed, it may be quite confusing to have a violin that play only for a few bars in the end and that wasn't "announced". Also, as you decided to add a violin, why not develop it a bit more? It would probably be very boring for the violinist to play that line, and it also sounds a little inconsistent, as it doesn't appear anywhere in the piece ever again. Also, I'd experiment more with diferent textures, so that the music doesn't have only one "feel" to it. Besides that, and what @Monarcheon said, I think this is a nice piece. Best wishes, Jean. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurt Francois Posted October 14, 2019 Author Share Posted October 14, 2019 Many thanks Monarcheon and Jean Szulc, greatly appreciate ! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alex2east Posted October 14, 2019 Share Posted October 14, 2019 I like the harmony! Has a very nice, melancholic style! A violin Melody would be nice. K.R. Alex 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurt Francois Posted October 15, 2019 Author Share Posted October 15, 2019 Many thanks alex2east ! 😎 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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