Hendrik Meniere Posted November 3, 2019 Share Posted November 3, 2019 (edited) Hi! I'm new here. I would be pleased if somebody gives me some feedback to this pice, is the last movement of a sonata for two pianos I'm writing: 3rd Movement Finale: Allegro Maestoso (3).mp3 Allegro Maestoso (1).pdf I advice that the pice it is not finished and that the coda is temporary. The sonata is called "Emperor " because is inspired in those gigantic paintings of battles. For creating the sensation of movement and horses moving there is this rhythm appearing most of the time in the pice: Thank you! 🙂 Edited November 5, 2019 by Hendrik Meniere Problems with the media :) !! MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Allegro Maestoso (3) > next PDF Allegro Maestoso (1) 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted November 9, 2019 Share Posted November 9, 2019 Having good ideas, the main issue is that the music runs in parallel all the time: melody (doubled or not) and rhythm. For a while it's nice, but on the long term it's not very idiomatic for the piano. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hendrik Meniere Posted November 11, 2019 Author Share Posted November 11, 2019 Thanks for you feedback 🙂 ! I just want to point out that this is only a draft, so for my final and defenitive version I will take in consideration what you said! Thanks @Luis Hernández!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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