Behdad Posted November 24, 2019 Share Posted November 24, 2019 Hi everyone! I will be so glad if you listen to my new album "10 Short Romances & Other Stories" on spotify :) I put the link below and I also upload one of the romances with the score here. Hope you enjoy! https://open.spotify.com/album/2wOwTIDkmCrwLyTZLN3qBb?fbclid=IwAR2YLudAo1HQyX2-drJfDYuEaIJXItf-_NcBxAwJdGDwcLhT2EVcichnynw MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Romance no2 - Rainy Romance > next PDF Romance for Piano and two Violins 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J.Santos Posted November 25, 2019 Share Posted November 25, 2019 Sounds great!! Nice job 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Behdad Posted November 25, 2019 Author Share Posted November 25, 2019 Thanks a lot :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted November 25, 2019 Share Posted November 25, 2019 It sounds very nice, but I expected the two violins not running in parallel all the time, when the two are active. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guillem82 Posted November 25, 2019 Share Posted November 25, 2019 (edited) That sounds great! But I agreed with Luís, I see a little too much parallel thirds on the violins. May be just one violin is enough and you could write the double notes on the hard beats...though I don't know, if that's technically possible. Edited November 25, 2019 by Guillem82 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Behdad Posted November 26, 2019 Author Share Posted November 26, 2019 I was struggling to choose between one or two violins. But in some parts the double notes would be very difficult to play by one violin. Also in one measure there is a contrapuntal motion that I liked it very much! And that made using two violins inevitable! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caters Posted November 26, 2019 Share Posted November 26, 2019 It sounds nice, but it would sound better if since the piano is basically playing the bass line for the most part, if one of the violins played a countermelody instead of just doubling the other violin in thirds. A countermelody doesn't have to be hard to write, just make it have a different melodic contour than the main melody and don't leave dissonances(either between the countermelody and the main melody or between the countermelody and the bass) unresolved without a purpose. That's really all there is to writing a countermelody. It would add some melodic richness to this piece and it might add some harmonic richness to it as well. It is a nice melody you have though, and the right hand playing a part in the bass line is unusual but it does add to this piece, so I think you should keep the bass line as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Behdad Posted November 27, 2019 Author Share Posted November 27, 2019 Thank you for these tips Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CalibriStandard Posted November 28, 2019 Share Posted November 28, 2019 Very original! Sounds great. First romance sort of reminded me of Chernyetsky's "Russian" Romance 🙂 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
panta rei Posted November 28, 2019 Share Posted November 28, 2019 Sounds nice, Good work! I am not too bothered by using two violins ( it gives the music a certain charm). But I would write another ending of the piece. It is a bit too abrupt for me. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Behdad Posted June 21, 2022 Author Share Posted June 21, 2022 Hi! This is the solo piano version of my piece. Hope you like it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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