Fruisen Posted December 30, 2019 Share Posted December 30, 2019 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jawoodruff Posted December 30, 2019 Share Posted December 30, 2019 Lovely piece. Almost reminds me of a rusty music box. My only thought is to perhaps expand the material into more tonal regions -might add another depth to it. Otherwise, good work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted December 31, 2019 Share Posted December 31, 2019 Nice piece, very idiomatic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bryla Posted December 31, 2019 Share Posted December 31, 2019 I would revoice some of your low intervals so they resonate more - moving them up in the tenor register. Either simply move it up in the chord or invert the interval. You B-flats should be spelled A-sharp Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jwpianist Posted January 3, 2020 Share Posted January 3, 2020 I really like the duple-vs-triple that you incorporated between the two hands! You might want to consider expanding the piece, though - it's over very quickly. However, the harmonies are really nice - I love the resolution in m.6. Great work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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