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I wonder if we can swear in different languages on here... hmm :whistling:

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10 hours ago, BlazingDragon said:

Gorgeous harmonies that go to unexpected places. I love the dissonance in the low-mid strings at 1:29 and again at 1:40! One small critique is that I wish there were fewer voices playing the third of the final chord. It sounds a bit off balance to me. 

 

Thank you! Yes I would agree in retrospect, maybe I could have added more tonics or fifths in the orchestration. Also I think the lower 3rd on the violas is slightly out if tune which kind of brings the problem into closer view.

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  • 2 weeks later...

Some of it reminds me of Mahler's Das Lied von der Erde  "Der Abschied"

Try 11:40

If you want to ever expand this (which I would really enjoy seeing), I would recommend decreasing the density of the orchestration, so that it sounds lighter, and that in important moments the listener can have a display of the power the orchestra.

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