jwpianist Posted January 7, 2020 Share Posted January 7, 2020 This is one of my longer works; just finished it today, so yay! I could really used some feedback for future versions, though. The formatting is also a little suspect, as are the harmonies, perhaps. I was going for an Impressionistic style. It is inspired by the journey of the Christian faith. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu The Sea of the Soul > next PDF The Sea of the Soul 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edfgi234 Posted January 8, 2020 Share Posted January 8, 2020 Its a nice listen. I do think the constant jumps back down the piano in the left hand are very difficult (but possible). I think more variation in both hands would be good, as the patterns are pretty much the same throughout the whole piece. The end was a nice change. Also, if played on a real piano, following the pedal notation would make the piece sound quite muddy. It does work here though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jwpianist Posted January 8, 2020 Author Share Posted January 8, 2020 4 hours ago, edfgi234 said: Its a nice listen. I do think the constant jumps back down the piano in the left hand are very difficult (but possible). I think more variation in both hands would be good, as the patterns are pretty much the same throughout the whole piece. The end was a nice change. Also, if played on a real piano, following the pedal notation would make the piece sound quite muddy. It does work here though. Thanks! Yeah, I got a bit lazy with the left hand! XD And yes, when I played some of this on a real piano, I changed the pedal three times a measure, as opposed to once. I'll have to go and add it back in. I appreciate the feedback! :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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