ModderKevin Posted January 9, 2020 Share Posted January 9, 2020 (edited) So I just composed my first piece and I would be very grateful to receive feedback. Please don't mind the mistakes in the recording. (I literally recorded the piece right after I composed it so please cut me some slack) Also, I feel that I did something wrong in the sheet music. Please let me know I didn't do it right. Thank you. Edited January 9, 2020 by ModderKevin MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Halimman - Nocturne No.1 in A flat minor Op.1 Blossom > next PDF Halimman - Nocturne No.1 in A flat minor Op.1 Blossom 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted January 9, 2020 Share Posted January 9, 2020 Your score... I feel a lot in 3/4, with the downbeat on the low notes. Is this notation a conscious decision? Like the beginning of a new phrase in the middle of m. 66 is baffling to me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ModderKevin Posted January 9, 2020 Author Share Posted January 9, 2020 Thank you so much for spotting that in measure 66! I'm really new to notation so I'm not very clear with this stuff. 😀 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KJthesleepdeprived Posted January 11, 2020 Share Posted January 11, 2020 Nice. Dramatic, but like low-key dramatic. The notation is a little odd for me. It's not terrible but I think the time signature should reflect the rhythmic pulse of the music. This would look and feel more natural in 3/4, like Monarcheon said. Other than that, nice work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jejrekmek Posted December 10, 2020 Share Posted December 10, 2020 Came from PTA reflections. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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